First assignment for Clevernick

[Dragon's muse]

Nick,

Will bow to muse's explanation here since it is essentially what I would have said. But let me see if I can put it into words that will make you feel it.

When writing a story an author has to capture the reader and hold him hostage to his words. If the reader spots these grammatical breaks he can use them to escape, and the money you are asking for goes with him.

i really like the hostage analogy.

[Rhabbi]

i really like the hostage analogy.

thank you muse.