Oh, thank you Beswitchingly, that is so encouraging. I will take on board what you say about sentences which work in my head, but have not worked on paper.

I thought it was interesting that you said you would have liked more a clue about how saw things coming - that was the one thing I did not get sorted in my head - and it obviously showed through. Bother. Guess that tells me a lot about what I cannot get away with. Double bother.

The dichotomy which you talk about is something which fascinated me for a long time, because I see it in my own life. It has always slightly amused me that so many men whom I work with are scared of me, yet I know how deeply submissive I am in another part of my life.

I found the comments which you made from looking at the whole complimentary to moptop's so thank you, both for reading it critically, and passing on your thoughts.

C.